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[maevebran]

[Poll #1545849]

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[jedibuttercup]

The thing is, that's a really nondescriptive logline, and thus a bit boring. You don't want to call her "a woman", use some more descriptive term; and maybe after "high school crush", put a comma followed by "now a...." [descriptive term for the guy].

[lt-kitty.livejournal.com]

Maybe if the high school crush were Katee Sackoff.

[orbinglight.livejournal.com]

would watch it if its a fun light movie (as opposed to a drama) and depends on if i like the actors :)

[maevebran.livejournal.com]

Every logline I've ever seen describes the main characters as either man or woman unless something else is crucial to the story like
A businessman falls in love with a hooker he hires to be his date for the weekend.
or
A cop comes to LA to visit his estranged wife and her office building is taken over by terrorists.

but I'll think about another way to put it.=)

[maevebran.livejournal.com]

not likely since the woman ends up pregnant.=)

[maevebran.livejournal.com]

It's suppossed to be a light, fluffy romantic comedy. Hopefully if it gets made the actors will be both recognizable and good.=)

[lt-kitty.livejournal.com]

That's where IVF comes in.

Either that or alien interference. Either way.

[jedibuttercup]

It's just... what kind of woman is she? A lonely woman? A frustrated careerwoman? And... it doesn't even specify that the "high school crush" is a guy, and these days, that might just matter. =)

It wasn't a bad logline. It just didn't pop, for me.